in this breath are kingdoms
made of small passage ways
giving freedom
of transit
moving through the illusions
of social dominance, social
hierarchies, the haves and the have nots
i want a simple life,
a small life,
just a few reliables,
and a lot of freedom
in this breath is so much more
than what I ask for.
it’s the witness of what lies
beyond the terror and the fear
that modern day living
activates.
*I’m just experimenting with words…
Lovely
Thank you, Alethea
You’re welcome π
I love this! β€
Thank you, Tania
very nice…
PS I like the new tagline π
Thank you! Iβve had it for a few months now π
Gentle and simple sounds good to me Ka! Breathe in, breathe out… π
Ah, deep breaths, Brad. And then see what unfolds… π
Hugs and blessings Ka.
Thank you, Brad ~same to you~ my friend.
Thanks !
a beautiful experiment my friend. I resonate their meaning, deeply.
I’ve missed you, KaylaB. I’m glad to see you my dear β€
Please keep experimenting. It’s lovely. I love the feel of this one.
I’m glad you like the feel of it. π Thank you
Beautiful Ka π
Thank you, Karen βοΈ
Continue with the experiment, it’s working!
Thank you, Eddie! Doing my best to flow with the flow π¦
Love this. I think that second stanza can stand alone as it’s own poem too. β€
Thank you. I see that too π
sounds wonderful, dear Ka!
coming thru those passages
& experiencing freedom
from what kept me
from being there
all along π
Thank you, David, freedom is the experience inevitably, perhaps… β€
Gentle, yet powerful – moving beyond to a breath of fresh air that opens up to freedom…
Your responses are always so thoughtful JoAnna, I am so grateful that you experienced this as a process.
It’s a great experiment!! π
“itβs the witness of what lies
beyond the terror and the fear
that modern day living
activates.”
These words touch a chord, La. It feels really hard.to handle the energy some days. I still want/need to believe that the energy of love will overcome the others.
Much love to you. And thank you, again, for your intuitive words π
Hereβs to building and strengthening that belief every single day! π Iβm with you, Lorrie! aloha my dear π and thank you, also!
Sweet blessings, beautiful Ka!!
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Awh! Youβve made me feel beautiful and I want to reflect that back to you! πππ thank you and all returned to you again ππ
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“In this breath is so much more than what I ask for.”
When we learn to take that deep breath and space within, it becomes so much more.
Loved your poem Ka. β€
Thank you, Sue. The poetry that comes from me often brings new awareness to me. Thank you for reading π
always a pleasure Ka